Storybird Narrative

Learner: Ami & Elnaz with Yuvika (LH6)                   Learning Coach:  DWilkes                    Date:   November 2017
Learning Area: iDevelop - Literacy - Creative Writing
NZC Achievement Objectives:	4Cs Observed:
*Recognise how to shape texts for a purpose and an audience. *Form and express ideas on a range of topics. *Use language features, showing some recognition of their effects. Success Criteria:  use Storybird to write a creative story with rhyming words. WALT: Use and read rhyming words    WALT:  communicate WALT: Build vocabulary	Ami & Elnaz Collaborated with Yuvika and Connected to their prior knowledge and to the pictures in the story.
Learning Observed
Ami & Elnaz began to learn about Storybird when the Hickey hapu wrote the story ‘Quack the Cat’ together. Both girls were happy that Ms Wilkes made them their own accounts.  Some LH6 girls came to work with us and their buddy was Yuvika. Yuvika patiently helped them to login to their Storybird accounts and helped them use the program so their funny, creative ideas could become a story. Each boy used their own account for their story.  It was challenging for Ami & Elnaz to remember to try to use -at words in the story but they loved looking through all the pictures. It was good that Yuvika helped them stay focused and they created some interesting stories with her.  Yuvika helped the girls to stay on task, and together they created some wonderful creative stories which were inspired by the pictures they selected from the Storybird library.  Initially Yuvika did most of the typing but all of the ideas came from the Ami & Elnaz. Yuvika came to work with them 6 times for 25 minutes. Ami & Elnaz have very unique ideas and demonstrates a growing understanding that they are writing for an audience and that the purpose is to entertain.  They used some appropriate and purposeful language features as well- such as metaphor, alliteration and rhyme.  Read the amazing stories where embedded below, by clicking on the links or by logging into Storybird. Here are the links to their story: https://storybird.com/books/unicorn-shadow/?token=9hac5sqzk9 https://storybird.com/books/sr47922xk4/?token=wa3kqws9j6
Evidence of learning
Next Learning Steps
I strongly encourage them to login to www.storybird.com at home using the login details: so they can continue to practice writing on their own at home. Username:AS182947 →  Password: thankyou for Ami Username:EH21314 → Password: thankyou for Elnaz

Literacy Narrative

Learner: Elnaz     Learning Coach: S Blake      Date: 10 August 2017

Learning Area: iDevelop

Learning Area:  iDevelop (Literacy) NZC Achievement Objectives:   English Level 1; Listening, Reading, and Viewing; Structure Students will… recognise and begin to understand text structures; understand that the order and organisation of words, sentences, and images contribute to meaning. NZC Achievement Objectives:   English Level 1; Speaking, Writing and Presenting; Structure Students will… uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning in simple texts begins to sequence ideas and information

Learning Observed

During iDevelop (Literacy) Elnaz has been working on using questions during reading and during writing she has been doing instructional writing. Elnaz has been exploring questions who, how, when, where, why and what during reading. As a group we read the book First to the Top by David Hill (from the school library) and asked questions about the book and Edmund Hillary’s story.Elnaz demonstrated her thinking capability and curiosity by thinking of questions during reading activities.  Elnaz participated and contributed in many workshops on asking questions and showed her collaboration by sharing her ideas with other learners. Elnaz has also been using instructional writing to explore how instructions are written and the details that are needed when writing instructions. She was able to help co-construct instructions for how to make a nutella sandwich with the group and then wrote instructions with a buddy about how to make a shape with blocks. Elnaz again showed her great collaboration skills while working with the group and with her buddy.

Evidence of learning

Next Learning Steps

Ask questions during reading at home or on bugclub Write instructions for your friends and family about how to do something that you enjoy

Sequencing Stories

Learner:    Elnaz          Learning Coach:  M Lennon              Date: 10 May 2017

Learning Area:  iExplore NZC Achievement Objectives:   English Level 1; Listening, Reading, and Viewing; Structure Students will… recognise and begin to understand text structures; understand that the order and organisation of words, sentences, and images contribute to meaning.

Learning Observed

This term Elnaz has been learning to sequence and summarise stories during reading workshops.   Elnaz has been working to identify the beginning, middle, and end of a story, before progressing to summarise the story using this language. Elnaz actively participated and contributed in many workshops, initially showing her capability of identify beginning, middle, and end parts from shared stories.  Elnaz then worked collaboratively with others to help them to identify different parts of the story too. After making connections and drawing on her own experiences, Elnaz was able to confidently apply her learning in order to summarise a self-chosen story using the language around beginning, middle and end.

Evidence of learning

Next Learning Steps

Continue helping others to sequence and summarise their stories. Try sequencing harder stories by using pictures.